I just wanted to publicly thank the members of my two critique groups, SFNovelist.com and The Long Beach Writers Meetup Group, for all of their help in critiquing my work. They caught several problems (some serious) that I was not aware of. It’s ultimately up to me to integrate their comments into a better story and I hope I’m up to the challenge. If you’re not in some sort of critique group, you don’t know what you are missing. Put your ego in check and listen to another professional’s opinion. You might be pleasantly surprised with the results.
– Brennan Harvey